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Thank you, Robin, for taking the time to review my novel.

Unfortunately, there are a few inaccuracies I'd like to address, the first being, no babies are murdered in this book. Please reread the section on Daniel. It is very clearly an accident.

Secondly, in the present day story line, the cause of Maggie's scars are revealed in her conversation with Garth and are not from domestic violence. I purposely made Maggie the one who resorted to physical violence in her marriage and not her husband, reversing the roles of which partner was being violent from the other storyline. He was verbally and emotionally abusive (just as damaging if not worse in many cases) but never physical.

As for the puncheon barrel at the end, it is an integral part of the legend so I felt it needed to be written as such. Admittedly, it's hard to imagine a family living in an oversized barrel, I realize that, but legends need to be accepted with a suspension of belief.

In regards to the lobsters, I'm aware they don't have vocal cords however I doubted that a woman living in rural NL back in 1887 would have that knowledge. As you point out, when the steam escapes out of them, it does sound like a the lobster is screaming so I assumed she might think that's what it was.

Last but not least, this book was not written as 'therapy' but rather as an exploration of the effects domestic violence has on mental health and how it can ripple down through generations until someone steps in to break the cycle. My biggest hope in writing it is that it will spark conversations on this matter.

Thank you again for your time,

Glenna

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